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The Commentary by Paul Gavarni

plate no. 9679

The Commentary

Paul Gavarni, 1843

lithography, paperRomanticismillustrationfiguredressbooktreelandscapefoliage
some experience helpful

Recreating this painting will help students develop skills in value shading, creating soft edges, and rendering fabric folds. It also provides practice in depicting a figure in a landscape setting.

technical profile

palette complexity
2
brushwork visibility
2
value contrast
4
compositional simplicity
3

study guide

est. 8 hrs

approach — 8 steps

  1. step 01

    Begin with a light sketch outlining the main shapes: the figure, the tree, and the background.

  2. step 02

    Establish the darkest areas of the composition, focusing on the tree and shadows.

  3. step 03

    Gradually build up the mid-tones in the background and the figure's dress using hatching and cross-hatching.

  4. step 04

    Pay close attention to the light source and how it affects the values on the figure's face and dress.

  5. step 05

    Add details to the face, hair, and hands, using finer lines for definition.

  6. step 06

    Render the book and the surrounding foliage with careful attention to texture.

  7. step 07

    Soften edges where necessary to create a sense of atmosphere.

  8. step 08

    Refine the overall composition by adjusting values and adding final details.

color palette

primary · black · white · gray

secondary ·

Achieve various shades of gray by diluting black ink or paint with water or mixing black and white paint.

techniques

  • ·hatching
  • ·cross-hatching
  • ·value shading
  • ·soft edges
  • ·rendering fabric

common pitfalls

  • →Creating harsh lines instead of soft transitions.
  • →Failing to establish a clear light source.
  • →Overworking the details and losing the overall sense of atmosphere.
  • →Not paying attention to the proportions of the figure.

materials

surface · Smooth drawing paper

required

  • ·Graphite pencils (HB, 2B, 4B)
  • ·Eraser
  • ·Drawing paper
  • ·Blending stump or tortillon
  • ·Ruler
  • ·Kneaded eraser

optional

  • ·Charcoal pencils
  • ·White chalk

Use a variety of pencil grades to achieve a full range of values. Experiment with different blending techniques to create smooth transitions.

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